Sunday, August 11, 2013

"Strange Little Machines"


In conversation, Glen Armstrong sometimes refers to this or that poem as a “strange little machine” and, among others, I think of Dickinson.  Some poets protest against the idea of their efforts being algorithms at work but it needn’t be an insult to attribute creativity to machinations.  With the right sort of machine and program running, one’ll have practically infinite variability in outcome.  “Nature” in: odd, lovely, machination out.

That’s how Dickinson works.  One could almost call it an “empirical” activity.  Nature, plus an awareness of “the” literature, in: riffs and variations from there.  I think of Whitman in this context, too, where the riffs become waves and the variations attempt to set us off into new territory.  Nature and literature get run through their minds and we end up with some fortunate inventions.

And by invention here I like to go back to what’s summed up in the old rhetorical word “inventio”, which people tell me can be translated from the Latin to English as either “invention” or “discovery”.  The ambiguity is an advantage here because it points to something that’s neither fabricated out of nothing nor completely given.  Rather, the result of inventio is partially constructed, not unlike they way we’ve found out memory works.  Our brains too are strange little machines.  -bbc    

Tuesday, July 30, 2013

Saint Rocco to the Rescue


I’ve been reading Dan Chelotti’s X and thinking about how the poem “Festival of Saint Rocco” might have tanked in a lesser poet’s hands. On the surface, the piece collects scenes from a carnival midway: the plastic clown faces at the shooting gallery, kids, a carny, fathers, the itinerant fencing around one of the rides.

Most of us at some point were prompted to list a scene’s details by a well-meaning writing teacher. Mission accomplished. A+. Or maybe A- because I still can’t quite “see” the children in line in detail. (Forgive her. Teaching is tough, and, again, she means well.)

It’s not the details from a carnival that elevate Chelotti’s piece from writing to poetry. It’s the incredibly skilled orchestration of tone. The target’s clown-tongues are “hit” sometimes “correctly.” This is a place of both laughter and static. Chaos and well defined lines. Some guys are fathers whose children will be returned spun around but not much worse for the wear after a ride on The Cobra. Others end up the carny whose “left incisor” is currently, but not always, elsewhere. These reversals of tone are a ride for the reader. We enter X. We buy a ticket and stand in line for page 64. The pleasant and the unpleasant threaten to smash into each other. (And the wait in line is more than fine, mind you. There is plenty to enjoy in Chelotti’s book.)

As the poem ends I have to ponder the “kinder sightlines” down which the good Saint Rocco blesses us. A divine presence taking aim seems just right.



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